Auntie Can Write Poems?!?

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Auntie Can Write Poems?!?

Post by auntslappy282 on Thu Oct 14, 2010 5:07 am

Well I thought I might as post these. Some of these are pretty old, but I thought I might as well post the some where. XD I'm sorry If they suck, or have blood and goer or other crap, (Who knows what my subconscious can come up with these days. XD) So yeah... XD Here ya go~ I'll post some poems! Constructive criticism is welcome. :3
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Rythm of the Rain

Post by auntslappy282 on Thu Oct 14, 2010 5:13 am

The eternal beating of the rain,
Thump da da Thump,
Peacefully laying on the floor,
Thump da da Thump,
Engulfed in the eternal dance,
Thump da da Thump,
Aggravated by the rhythm,
Thump da da Thump,
Wind shield whippers added to the eternal beat,
Theshqee dasqwa dasqee Thesquee sqwa,
The eternal dance never ending,
Theshqee dasqwa dasqee Thesquee sqwa,
Then the light that splits the dance in half,
CRACK A BOOM!

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Spike

Post by auntslappy282 on Thu Oct 14, 2010 7:21 am

The heap of energetic white fur,
Two black dots upon his head,
The many sqweecks of sadness, sacredness, and protest,
Many adventurous times,
Finding little toys in this little ferrets bedding,

The same ferret who almost died twice,
Turned older and older,
Just skin and bones,
A heap of yellowish white fur,
Eyes black as coal,
Keeps secrets better than any friend,
The language only him and me know,
The best friend you could ever have,
A pure heart and soul
A ferret who's memories will last a thousand life times,
Spike the beautiful ferret.

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Halloween Night

Post by auntslappy282 on Thu Oct 14, 2010 7:23 am

At night grave yards are dull,
But underground is full,

And a black cat sits on the wall,
Next to a dark mall,

The owls are calling,
The sun is falling,

The dark is over coming,
And owls are falling,

This is Halloween Night!

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Remembering the Loved, Spike

Post by auntslappy282 on Thu Oct 14, 2010 7:31 am

We met you at a young age,
Naive was I,
Thinking that,
We could all be together,
Forever,

We lived together.
Through the toughest,
Of times,
We were,
Together through thick,
And thin,

Playing, chasing, running, sleeping,
Through sickness,
And injury,
You were always there,
For me when I needed it,
Not knowing,
That the time was coming,
On a cold morning,
The look on your face,
Hurt, tired, sad, and yet,
Happy,

We wanted to help,
But we couldn't,
I watched you,
Drift off,
Into eternal sleep,
I didn't get to say,
Or tell,
You the things I wanted to,
But you are,
Always,
Always in my heart.
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Bloody Death (Ballade of a Vampire)

Post by auntslappy282 on Thu Dec 09, 2010 4:13 am

Just forget,
I ruined your life,
Take away the scars,
With the bullet of a gun.

The things I did,
Unforgettable crimes,
Take the bullet,
And smell the blood.

Scarlet like a rose,
Sent of the dead,
Feelings left unheard,
Please let me go.

Thoughts will be left behind,
No one will remember,
The evils I did,
Or the night I moved on.
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